You need some more structure in there, it still seems like things are still floating, especially that floor plane the person is on, the DETAILing would make the perspective very convincing.
stanley... stop working on this and make the plans and sections read...WITH the plaza as an integrated entity. PLEASE.
this drawing, although not a waste, does not help that much considering the drawings you have already done...(the sections) it does NOT show the true space, as there is another floor...
the only thing it clarifies is skin and structure... and the structure is not clear here... where are the tension rods?
you are not IN the space in this drawing. stop fussing with it graphically ...i dont think it matters much.
show us the space from within (IF YOU HAVE CLEAR AND COMPLETE PLANS)
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You need some more structure in there, it still seems like things are still floating, especially that floor plane the person is on, the DETAILing would make the perspective very convincing.
stanley...
stop working on this and make the plans and sections read...WITH the plaza as an integrated entity.
PLEASE.
this drawing, although not a waste, does not help that much considering the drawings you have already done...(the sections)
it does NOT show the true space, as there is another floor...
the only thing it clarifies is skin and structure...
and the structure is not clear here...
where are the tension rods?
you are not IN the space in this drawing.
stop fussing with it graphically ...i dont think it matters much.
show us the space from within (IF YOU HAVE CLEAR AND COMPLETE PLANS)
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