Liz, I think you captured some great footage, I especially like the part when you walked by the white tent-like structures, and panned back and forth from the tents to the walk way, to the black gates, and back to the tents. I do however think the audiences' experience of being in a maze is affected your title. The title is just as much a part of your work as the footage. You gave us a context when you titled it "Forte Greene Maze"(at least for those of us who know where that is), and simultaneously took away the Mystery.
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Liz, I think you captured some great footage, I especially like the part when you walked by the white tent-like structures, and panned back and forth from the tents to the walk way, to the black gates, and back to the tents. I do however think the audiences' experience of being in a maze is affected your title. The title is just as much a part of your work as the footage. You gave us a context when you titled it "Forte Greene Maze"(at least for those of us who know where that is), and simultaneously took away the Mystery.
thanks, i didnt even think of that when choosing a title. im going to have to think about that for a bit.
read sculpting in time...pg 69-72 and around...
i am curious to see what you think.
there is good stuff here...
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