I made a list of words and ideas that I had been work from for my metaphor. 'Frame of mind' is what I am came up with. The idea being what is seen and how it is perceived.
how is this anaysis? your intent? frame of mind isnt a metaphor. the mind is a frame. or the frame is a mind. ok...how so? i dont think either of these are strong or specific enough. and i dont know enough about what you are thinking to help.
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I made a list of words and ideas that I had been work from for my metaphor. 'Frame of mind' is what I am came up with. The idea being what is seen and how it is perceived.
how is this anaysis? your intent?
frame of mind isnt a metaphor.
the mind is a frame.
or
the frame is a mind.
ok...how so?
i dont think either of these are strong or specific enough.
and i dont know enough about what you are thinking to help.
anaLysis?
so tell us about the color.
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