notes from final review.

sorry for the very late posting

Final Critique
Comments:
Made a lot of progress – is home depot the model?
Chart with forte and piano – if you could zoom in on them and give specific examples that would help – also shift in scale
Images at the end – playing with fore and background
Take the program and take the chart and tools and go through systematically and say this is what I achieve in the end and document and record your outcomings
Build 30 models of each individual outcome/system
Video – fantastic, very effective
Figure out the body to relation to the other
Very clear connection illustrated – certain logic to it – add sound to it
Instead of using chart use material practice
What is the intention of department store?
It’s highly choreographed
There’s domesticity embedded there
B&H example- there the merchandise is brought to you mechanically
MTV – ESPN – Times Square location – mass consumer culture – what do you want to accomplish? Figure out relation between consumer and the commercial merchandise
What is your store?
Perhaps critique the mall within the city.