you need a piece of furniture or something in the foreground of the fourth shot...for starters...compositionally
in the fourth shot
feels a bit like prison bars right now...considering the relationship to the 'cell' (fourth shot)
something nice about the top shot as a compressed backyard space (with fence)
the handrail is so prominent in the third shot...seems like a very important detail to your project...where the body finds stability through the hand...guidance...and orientation...doesnt seem so carefully considered...but very shiny
are you going to have shots of the exterior 'rooms?'
yes...that close shot was chosen to include the handrail detail...it is every where in the building..will do some editing to make it better...
i will try to produce those exterior shots if times allow..
you need a piece of furniture or something in the foreground of the fourth shot...
ReplyDeletefor starters...compositionally
in the fourth shot
ReplyDeletefeels a bit like prison bars right now...considering the relationship to the 'cell' (fourth shot)
ReplyDeletesomething nice about the top shot as a compressed backyard space (with fence)
ReplyDeletethe handrail is so prominent in the third shot...seems like a very important detail to your project...where the body finds stability through the hand...guidance...and orientation...
ReplyDeletedoesnt seem so carefully considered...but very shiny
are you going to have shots of the exterior 'rooms?'
ReplyDeleteyes...that close shot was chosen to include the handrail detail...it is every where in the building..will do some editing to make it better...
ReplyDeletei will try to produce those exterior shots if times allow..
ReplyDelete